tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post621698930286653304..comments2024-03-08T20:57:25.380-08:00Comments on Julie Musil, Author: Red pencil time?Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-87612415647820043342010-11-02T07:00:01.570-07:002010-11-02T07:00:01.570-07:00Oooh, you've reminded me I need to read his bo...Oooh, you've reminded me I need to read his book! I've had it for months now and the book list has kept climbing...<br /><br />I do love the editing process, but I'm not as solid on the pre-planning stages. I'm more of a pantser. Sigh.Victoria Dixonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14012092208934951963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-44208941797758084152010-10-25T14:00:14.417-07:002010-10-25T14:00:14.417-07:00I say that about woodworking, that the difference ...I say that about woodworking, that the difference between amateurs and professionals is the amount of time they spend sanding and finishing their work.<br /><br />Anyone can slap it together, but it takes a pro to make it look ready for the showroom floor!<br /><br />Same for your books. It's the amount of finishing you give your product that makes it salesworthy.<br /><br /> - EricEric W. Tranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13842968931062056407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-45375219368670473092010-10-22T13:05:39.550-07:002010-10-22T13:05:39.550-07:00I used to dread revisions, but now I actually like...I used to dread revisions, but now I actually like them. Have a plan for each round--don't expect to get the whole book done in one pass--that's what I've learned.Jill Kemererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07865493609868329393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-29928871075488429282010-10-22T04:07:30.445-07:002010-10-22T04:07:30.445-07:00these are great tips...I also print it off and rea...these are great tips...I also print it off and read outloud. And I ask a few writer friends to read and review too and to be as brutal as they can.Nikki (Sarah)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13731200601840020130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-19359616841847894772010-10-21T17:26:57.184-07:002010-10-21T17:26:57.184-07:00I love all the tips everyone shares and these are ...I love all the tips everyone shares and these are great ones. I used to live in fear of red pencils....now, I'm looking forward to them!!!!The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-82174817100297423992010-10-21T10:44:38.247-07:002010-10-21T10:44:38.247-07:00I was traumatized as a kid with the red pen so I u...I was traumatized as a kid with the red pen so I use a green pen. Ha.<br /><br />Printing out page and reading aloud catches a LOT of things for me.Karen Stronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08697785820907711723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-4336319836985089392010-10-21T08:21:05.863-07:002010-10-21T08:21:05.863-07:00Ouch- printing it! I change things so fast and wow...Ouch- printing it! I change things so fast and wow- I'd go through a lot of paper. Sounds harsh and funAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-23859882598116390272010-10-21T08:05:58.897-07:002010-10-21T08:05:58.897-07:00These are all awesome suggestions. One thing I do...These are all awesome suggestions. One thing I do while I'm working off a printed copy, when I get to a spot that needs major expanding or revising or rewriting, I mark it with a number and then write the new changes in a notebook - marked with the same number. When I'm ready to type it all into the computer and I get to that spot, I just go to the corresponding number in the notebook. =o)B.E. Sandersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04336115135400388268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-18973961869107282242010-10-21T05:07:09.334-07:002010-10-21T05:07:09.334-07:00I check each scene for a clear character goal, and...I check each scene for a clear character goal, and an inner and outer turning point. This helps me make sure the scene really needs to be there.Laura Paulinghttp://www.laurapauling.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-59785850174408476892010-10-21T01:51:06.556-07:002010-10-21T01:51:06.556-07:00Good luck with your revisions, Julie. Look out for...Good luck with your revisions, Julie. Look out for repetitions, dialogues that do not move the scene (especially long dialogues). Search for long paragraphs of back story and lengthy descriptions.Rachna Chhabriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900999965919504282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-31751175252597455832010-10-20T22:26:05.590-07:002010-10-20T22:26:05.590-07:00Good luck with your rewrite! They're tough, bu...Good luck with your rewrite! They're tough, but I actually love them. :)<br /><br />One thing I do to help with the plot is to label each scene or chapter with a quick description of the scene (I do it during the first draft). Then, before I start rewriting, I take these descriptions out, put them in order in a separate document, and I've got a quick outline of exactly how my plot flows. When I have that outline in front of me, it's easy to see where my plot is lagging. I then rewrite my outline, indicating where I'm moving/removing/adding certain scenes, and my rewrite is made much easier!Shalleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09907680428735740943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-7990268355511442772010-10-20T21:42:05.682-07:002010-10-20T21:42:05.682-07:00Man, I've GOT to get this book! Everyone post ...Man, I've GOT to get this book! Everyone post excerpts and they all always feel like he's speaking directly to me. Thanks for sharing, Julie! I'm in the middle of revision and am hating it. Definitely bookmarking this post, friend!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />JackeeJackeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03351019926958000627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-9978670638932650762010-10-20T19:55:15.113-07:002010-10-20T19:55:15.113-07:00Those are great tips!
I agree with Melinda - I do...Those are great tips!<br /><br />I agree with Melinda - I do it in stages looking for specific things each time. Right now I'm doing searches on my trouble words like "was", "were", "that", etc. Also checking for sensory details, setting details, and character voice.Susan Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-31230499069158811842010-10-20T19:04:21.412-07:002010-10-20T19:04:21.412-07:00Red freaks me out, so I have a special purple pen....Red freaks me out, so I have a special purple pen. Revising is also a great excuse to go to Office Max and buy multi-colored highlighters. I print and do a silent read first. For the next pass I flip on my "delusions of grandeur" switch and pretend I'm recording the audio book. So many mistakes, so little time.Leslie S. Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17122865337924270039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-58986440075203767712010-10-20T18:02:51.888-07:002010-10-20T18:02:51.888-07:00I've heard printing your ms in a different fon...I've heard printing your ms in a different font than you wrote it in will give you new eyes for the story. I haven't tried it yet, tho. :)PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-16997073032042343492010-10-20T17:23:43.044-07:002010-10-20T17:23:43.044-07:00I LOVE my red pen. Editing is my happy place. But,...I LOVE my red pen. Editing is my happy place. But, I give my red pen a rest now and then and use different colored highlighters to highlight any time I mention a character, different colors for different characters. That way I can easily make sure I didn't screw up the details about them, make sure they are making an appearance enough or not too much, and can decide how necessary they are.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-43941240566077174392010-10-20T16:54:45.509-07:002010-10-20T16:54:45.509-07:00Love the wannabe line!!! :)
I've gone through...Love the wannabe line!!! :)<br /><br />I've gone through mine with all kinds of red pens and am starting on the rewrite!Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-9177621789584528022010-10-20T16:45:22.244-07:002010-10-20T16:45:22.244-07:00You know I've tried editing off paper and I ju...You know I've tried editing off paper and I just don't seem to be able to do it well unless I'm working in small chunks. But if I go a chapter at a time, I can stay focused. :)<br /><br />Angela @ The Bookshelf MuseAngela Ackermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01808259088625142389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-80265859934843916532010-10-20T16:19:18.792-07:002010-10-20T16:19:18.792-07:00Glad you saw my post today:)
Now relating to your...Glad you saw my post today:)<br /><br />Now relating to your post...<br />-Always be patient and keep in mind that nothing can be done to perfection...especially the first time around. <br />-Always print out chapters of your book and edit them over --yes, with your red pens.<br />-Outline if you're able to because let's face it: Sometimes the right words don't come to you.<br />-Remember you're not alone and you have lots of support. None of us want editing and whatnot to drive us totally insane. (I know you've got a great support system at home.)<br />-Editing is necessary so you can hate it but remember to take it seriously and stay focused.<br /><br />Hope my suggestions here and there were helpful. Continue to write, Julie.<br />--LindseyLindsey Richardsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05479405614100115901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-60056596438160874222010-10-20T15:43:52.542-07:002010-10-20T15:43:52.542-07:00Hemingway once said that the first draft of anytin...Hemingway once said that the first draft of anyting is s***. Keep writing, you are going to make it!<br /><br />JaneJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15206732452961715943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-43005811833615294042010-10-20T14:42:34.935-07:002010-10-20T14:42:34.935-07:00Thank you for sharing these with us. Changing the ...Thank you for sharing these with us. Changing the font and reading the text -- especially the dialogue -- out loud definitely makes a difference.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-76662500730680424612010-10-20T14:20:50.160-07:002010-10-20T14:20:50.160-07:00I was just about to suggest changing the font when...I was just about to suggest changing the font when I saw JEFritz said it first. I love the idea of printing it out but I don't want to waste the paper or ink. I've found that changing the font works well for the first run-through, then I have my critique group look at it. They see things I'd never see.Clara Kensiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01739170567096747793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-15086988408014624062010-10-20T13:16:50.630-07:002010-10-20T13:16:50.630-07:00Change the font. It helps change your mindset when...Change the font. It helps change your mindset when you go in to read it again.J E Fritzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03372746219262163566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-30114718910053190032010-10-20T13:10:09.101-07:002010-10-20T13:10:09.101-07:00You mean we have REVISE??? *gasps* He he he. Ju...You mean we have REVISE??? *gasps* He he he. Just kidding!! ;DLisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4206355073837906221.post-74705805408585937422010-10-20T12:56:12.673-07:002010-10-20T12:56:12.673-07:00For me, letting the WIP sleep on its own for a whi...For me, letting the WIP sleep on its own for a while works wonders. I return with new eyes, ideas and lack of attachment that allows me to cut and make changes effectively.Robert Guthriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15618840090348189477noreply@blogger.com