Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Writing when we're not writing

Last week all three of my sons graduated. Between parties, ceremonies, and more parties, we've been on the run for days (in a non-criminal way). Almost zero writing got done, and at first I felt guilty about it. But I soon realized how much writing I actually accomplished, even though my butt was not in a chair.

Here are some ways to work when we're not writing:
  • Solving problems. Worrisome plot issues, tricky scenes, and questionable threads can be examined and resolved when we're not staring at the computer screen.
  • Choreographing future scenes. What will be the beginning, middle, and ending of the scene? What will be the goal and conflict of the characters? These details can be worked out away from the writer's chair.
  • Collecting character quirks. When we're out and about among living, breathing people, we have access to limitless character traits worth stealing.
  • Gathering setting details. Parties, ceremonies, restaurants, malls, theme parks. These events and places are ripe with setting information. If we keep paper and pen with us at all times, we can scratch down sensory details for later use.
  • Ideas for the next project. Ideas swirl through our heads when we're performing menial tasks away from our manuscripts. All we need to do is reach out and grab them, saving them for when we're ready to plot the next book.
The "boys in the basement," as Stephen King calls them, never stop working. Solutions and ideas come to us when we least expect them. Besides, when we're away from the page, we're refilling our creative wells.

While I was wearing my busy mommy hat, I was able to untangle at least two of my problematic story issues. What writing tasks do you accomplish when you're not writing?

Saturday, June 25, 2011

Inspiration for Writers--5th Grader Style

My 11-year-old twins graduated from elementary school a few days ago, and their principal sent each student home with a bag of goodies. The simple items within represented a strong and inspirational message, and I thought we writers could use a 5th grader-style boost. Your virtual goodie bag includes the following:
  • The cotton ball is to remind you to use soft words with each other.
  • The chocolate Kiss is to comfort you when you are feeling sad.
  • The sticker is to remind you that you should stick together and help each other.
  • The penny is to remind you that you are valuable and very special.
  • The rubber band will remind you to stretch the possibilities and try new things.
  • The star is to remind you to shine and always do your best.
  • The tissue is to remind you to help dry someone's tears.
  • The toothpick is to remind you to pick out quality friends along the way.
  • The eraser is to remind you that we all make mistakes--it's ok to start over.
I don't know who created this idea, or who wrote the sweet words, but I thought it was adorable.

Now let's get out there and conquer the middle school, I mean publishing, world!


Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Is your story worth saving?

I'm deep in revisions on a story, and I'm having a love/hate relationship with it. I've even ventured into "is it worth saving?" territory. I scoured the blogosphere for a magic answer, but soon realized I must make this decision on my own. Here are some questions I asked myself:

Do you love this story?
Is the story structure solid?
Does it have a unique hook?
Does it pack an emotional punch?
Despite parts that make you want to pull your hair out,
are there really good parts too?

Fortunately I was able to answer yes to these questions. While not every story can be saved, I realized this wasn't a question of whether or not my story was worth saving, but whether or not I was willing to put in the hard word to rescue it.

What to do? In WRITING MAGIC, Gail Carson Levine tells how she writes several versions of some scenes, then chooses the one that works best. And in this great post by Susan Sipal we're reminded to follow J.K. Rowling's example and "...rewrite until we get it right."

And there are still two life preservers I haven't thrown yet:
  1. Beta readers. We're too close to our own work, and it becomes impossible to separate the "what were you thinking?" moments from the "wow, this is good" moments. Plotting & pacing issues, inconsistencies, and unnatural dialog might become white noise to the writer, but beta readers will point this out. A life saver indeed.
  2. Patience. This is the tough part. I want my story to be perfect right now. Levine reminds us that no book is perfect, even those currently sitting on shelves (although some are darn close). And there's no rule that says the 5th, 7th, or 18th draft must be the draft. If we're patient, the true story, the one that was meant to be told, will come to fruition.
Is your story worth saving, or should you allow it to sink quietly to the bottom of the sea? In my opinion, that's a personal choice each writer must make. If you've found a resource that helps with this decision, please share it in the comments.

Sunday, June 19, 2011

CRACK the CODE Winner!

A loud click sounds within the door. Heart drumming, you pull on the handle and the monstrous round door swings open.

Winning Code: 84-12-88

Congrats goes to Sarah Templeton who successfully CRACKED the CODE at The Bookshelf Muse, winning a copy of PLOT & STRUCTURE (Bell)! Please contact me as soon as possible so I can get your prize to you! Thanks everyone for playing along & helping to celebrate a great writing community. :)

Saturday, June 18, 2011

Tag...I'm it!


I've been tagged by the lovely Leslie Rose! Here's the scoop:

Do you think you’re hot?

Is short, plain, and forty-something hot? Just checking.

Upload a picture or wallpaper that you’re using at the moment.


The family visiting the Golden Gate Bridge in San Francisco

When was the last time you ate chicken meat?

Last night when we met my in-laws for dinner. Chili's chicken quesadilla salad. Yum.

The song(s) you listened to recently.

"Need You Now" by Lady Antebellum. My twin 11 year olds love that song, and we sing it over and over again on the way to school (they're still in school until next Tuesday).

What were you thinking as you were doing this?

What happened to my California sun? It's cold outside!

Tag you’re it…


Thanks for the fun, Leslie!

Be sure to check back tomorrow when the winners of the Crack the Code contest over at The Bookshelf Muse will be announced.

And happy birthday to my wonderful, devoted, supportive husband. You know the song "Always and forever, each moment with you. It's just like a dream to me, that somehow came true." Yep, he's that awesome.

Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Must writers be natural storytellers?


While I've always loved escaping deep into the pages of a great story, and I've enjoyed writing since I was a child, I've never fancied myself a natural storyteller. I envy the writers whose stories gush from their minds faster than they can type. For me, each plot point, character, and scene must be pried from my brain.

Thankfully, I don't believe The Big Lie--that writers are born, and if you don't have what it takes, you'll never get it. Storytelling can be learned. Here are some ways we can become storytellers, and improve our skills:


Critique partners: my writing buddies are so talented, and I learn something new from them each time I read their work. Yes, we help our partners when we critique, but we also gain knowledge.

Writer's days or conferences: I've only been to one-day conferences, but each time I've left the event feeling energized and ready to roll. If you're on a tight budget, like me, mark your calendars for the awesome WriteOnCon, taking place August 16-18. It's free!

Writer's and agent's blogs: the amount of information floating around the blogosphere blows my mind. Elizabeth S. Craig created the Writer's Knowledge Base (also linked on my sidebar). Type in the subject you need help with, and a long list of related blog posts appears. The Bookshelf Muse is an amazing tool for writers who need help with descriptions for characters, emotions, weather, and so much more.

Read great books: thanks to D. U. Okonkwo's smart comment, I'm adding this to the list. Thanks!

Lisa Green (one of my talented critique partners) wrote a great post about The Secret Formula to writing great books. And Justine Dell wrote this interesting post--I'm a storyteller, not a writer. Check 'em out!

Are you a natural storyteller? #jealous
What has helped you improve your storytelling skills?


Sunday, June 12, 2011

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